Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Post #3: Paper #1...

Dear Class,
I'm hoping you're spending extra time on your Paper #1 revisions, so your new blog response is shorter than usual: state one specific area that is still not 100% clear to you (e.g. I'm not sure if my thesis is too obvious) about Paper #1 and/or name one specific thing in your rough draft that you would like feedback on (e.g. "I would like feedback on whether or not I'm quotes effectively").

Due: Before Thursday's class

Reminder: This week is the last chance you have to get feedback on Paper #1. I'll be out of town and away from e-mail for the long weekend. Also, if you haven't already responded to Post #2, it's not too late!
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12 comments:

  1. Heidi ImhoffFebruary 10, 2010 at 4:23 PM

    I understand what to do already. I would just like more feedback on my writing. For example, if I am giving enough detail or not enough, or how to fit in rhetorical strategies.

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  2. Jessica HernandezFebruary 10, 2010 at 8:57 PM

    I know what to write about now for my essay because I believe I have my thesis sentence right. I would like more feedback writing my essay. For expample, I don't think I'm giving out enough information on what I'm writing about, or I don't think I'm giving enough detail to support my thesis.

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  3. ashleyjohnsonFebruary 10, 2010 at 9:47 PM

    One thing I would like feedback on my paper is if im relating everything in my paragraphs to my thesis. I think I may not be making the point that im trying to make.

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  4. UnknownFebruary 10, 2010 at 10:00 PM

    For my essay I know what i have to write about. My thesis still needs to be stronger but i think with more revisions Ill get it right. I would like more feedback on how to describe my emotions about nature without making it sound long and boring and without making every sentence a description sentence.

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  5. Matt HarrisFebruary 10, 2010 at 10:01 PM

    For my essay i would like feedback on my thesis. I would like to know if it is strong enought to be considered the main idea and also if my body paragraphs relate back to my thesis.

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  6. UnknownFebruary 10, 2010 at 10:05 PM

    I would like feedback on how to improve my thesis and how to make my point more clear

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2010 at 11:50 PM

    I dont think that my introduction is very good. i would like to get feedback on my body paragraphs whether they are flowing together or not.

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2010 at 12:05 AM

    I would like feedback on my body paragraphs like if i am going off topic and if i need to include more about my topic. Also i tend to go off topic .Other then that i am okay.

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  9. Jon ashdownFebruary 11, 2010 at 12:19 AM

    I am pretty clear on all instructions for writing this essay. I would like some input on how to tie everything in my paper together in a strong concluding paragraph.

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  10. Brad SheelorFebruary 11, 2010 at 1:20 AM

    My intro and my thesis is strong, but I can always use help on structuring the long paragraphs I have, some of its almost seems like to much, and then again, some of it seems like its not enough.

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  11. Kim NelsonFebruary 14, 2010 at 10:28 PM

    I'm still not so confident about my paper as a whole. I think that I'm just overthinking the whole thing. But I would defintally like to know what I could work on so I can improve my paper and writing as a whole

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  12. alexFebruary 15, 2010 at 2:54 PM

    i would like to get feedback on my body paragraph i do think i lose attention and start writing to much.

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